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By Yanik Silver Many
people say they can spot a good letter when they see it, but the problem
is when it comes down to writing one, they simply freeze up. That's why I
want to take you behind the scenes of a successful sales letter I wrote
and illustrate the thinking that goes into writing a killer letter that
generated a healthy 3810% ROI. This letter sold all of the clients
overstock merchandise and they even created a waiting list. You'll
find my comments [YS Comments:] in the [bracketed section] below so
let's get started... Can
You Get A New $8,000 Power Table For $417? [YS
Comments: First off, the headline is a grabber and makes people
want to read more. Anyone interested in your product at a bargain price
would certainly continue reading.] Read
The Amazing Facts To Find Out How... [YS
Comments: Next, the subhead tells prospects that the answer is
right inside this letter if they keep reading.] Dear
Friend, Yes,
it's absolutely true. You can really replace your old, worn-out exam table
and only pay $417 out of your pocket (But only if you are one of the first
2 people to respond to this letter.) Let me explain. [YS
Comments: Your first sentence is absolutely critical to your
letter. If your first sentence doesn't make people want to keep reading,
you can expect your letter to end up in the circular file. So make sure it
keeps their interest piqued and follow up on the headline promise in the
first sentence. Last
April, our little company took a big gamble and signed up for a power
table promotion. In order to get on the promotion we had to agree to take
3 power tables--nearly $15,000. (And for a small company like us, that's a
lot of money to be tied up in inventory). [YS
Comments: The next paragraph I begin to explain the story of
why we're selling this product at such a bargain price. I've discovered
that telling people the truth and giving a reason why is actually one of
the most powerful psychological motivators to action.] And
My Problem Is Your Opportunity [YS
Comments:This subhead turns the letter back around to what's in
it for the reader. Everyone is always silently asking themselves "So
what?" and "Who cares?". You've got to keep the focus on
what the reader will gain from the letter.] In
order to move these last 2 tables I've decided to do something somewhat
bold and a little daring. [YS
Comments: Here I explain how and why I'm willing to make a
sensational deal.] The
regular price for a XXX power table is $8,000 but during this promotion
they were on sale for $5,375 (which is a pretty good deal anyway). [YS
Comments: I introduce the special offer and the reason why
we're selling the product at such a discount. That's a key point, because
unless you give people a believable reason for the reduced price they
won't believe you. Nobody thinks you're lowering the price because you're
"such a nice guy" so let them in on the reason behind your
offer.] What?
I promised you could get a power table for only $417 and here's how...
[YS
Comments: I answer an anticipated objection here since I
promised they could get the table for only $417.] Here's
How To Get That New Power Table For Almost "Zip" By buying a
power table, you can qualify for a 50% tax credit under section 44 of the
Americans with Disabilities Act. That's right Fifty Percent! All because a
power table will glide up and down to accommodate disabled and handicapped
patients. [YS
Comments: Here I've explained each of the incentives and how
they can really get the table for such a low cost. Plus added in a few
extra bonuses and now I'll another bonus to really increase their desire.] You
Can Pay In 3 Easy Installments With Zero Interest. We'll break up your
payments into 3 easy installments, spread thirty days apart. [YS
Comments: I bring back the deadline here and scarcity again. So not
only do they have a limit on the number of units available, but there is
also a time deadline. This is a double whammy to get people to take action
immediately.] Here's
What You Should Do Now Pick
up your phone and dial xxx-xxxx and reserve one of these last 2 tables
with your credit card. Or in case, you're still undecided call us and ask
for some more information to be faxed to you. Otherwise, you'll be giving
up the ease and convenience of having a power table at this bargain price.
I really hope you're one of the 2 lucky doctors who decide to take
advantage of this golden opportunity. [YS
Comments: In this closing paragraph I give readers a little
pain by mentioning what they'll be missing if they don't act on this
offer.] Sincerely, XXXX
P.S.
Hurry! This letter is being sent to 1,500 local doctors and this offer is
strictly limited to the first 8 people who respond. [YS
Comments: The P.S. is your last place to help prospects make a
buying decision. People go from the headline in a letter to the signature
to the P.S., so your P.S. should be powerful. Here I introduce even more
scarcity. I let them know exactly how many people (specifics sell) are
receiving this letter and it makes the limited quantity seem even more
limited since so many other people are getting this same announcement.]
I guarantee by using the same elements that I just illustrated, you'll see your next sales letter produce incredible results.
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